Woops forgot about this thread! So I figured I would give an update
Great advice in this thread, that being said I spoke to heaps of people after posting this and decided against using a service, I sat down and went back over it and redid it.. while I was working it I got pinged about a new job through a old workmate..
Sent my new shiny resume in, did the normal interviews and it included some comments about how good my resume is and I got the job! happy days
From what Hz said I couldn't agree more, I cut out all the bullshit in my resume, its 3 pages + a little bit for my resume with references if I get pinged.
Follows this format
Name/Address/Details
2 short paragraph blurb full of buzz words
area of experience (bullet point of things I know)
Then I have my previous 3 jobs listed out, quick 1 paragraph blurb and then a list of Achievements followed by a short "role" section
Next 4 jobs have a single line with the title/company and dates
Certs
References
Done
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short and sweet
If anyone is keen I can flick mine over to have a look at